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The Kidney Heist

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(Sorry if I drew an urban myth base picture.^^;)

Yup, we all remember this urban myth right? Kidney Heist is one of those tales that a stranger or woman buys you a drink and a couple more to go at the point of being drunk and helped back to your room or any for you to lay down. You slept over night and wake up with an hang over and a note. That very note you read says, "Hay buddy, my best pal! Glad you we drank and had one hell of a fun night you and I had. Hay!, hope you wont get too upset about what I've done to ya. the phone is next to ya, CALL 911 NOW! and thanks for the Kidneys." (In reality I don't think they'll write or leave a note like that.^^;)

Hope you like it and no random background Oc or proto-dolls are harmed in this picture.

Also i think I may screwed up some things in the pic, but let's hear you opinion?^^;
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I like the composition and perspective. Specially the perspective. Maybe the bath could be a little bit improved in that aspect but it's done very very good in my opinion.

I also like the bright vivid red in contrasts with the dark background.

His expression and body language is great as well. You can just see his desperation and the urgent of the situations at first glimpse.

The detail of he having his back still open is a little crude, I think no one could survive that way too long. I think the urban myth is that you're sew back again, the ice is for the wound not to get swollen or infected. Anyway, it's a spine-chilling detail.

I think your technique at colouring with pencils could be a little better with just a bit more of patience.

Proportions and perspective of the character look fairly right.

Nice piece mate. Congratulations.